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What it does is that it makes everything overlong and makes it so that all urgency or immediacy is stripped from the story. All of these extra words cause the reader to become bored and also the pacing is killed by them the extra words.
What I am saying is not that you should always avoid passive voice, but that you should say as much as you can in as few words as you can. Case in point, the above paragraphs: Newbie authors often make the mistake of writing too much of their work in passive voice out of a misguided desire to make their sentences sound more sophisticated.
Back to top Purple prose Florid prose is very difficult to pull off.
Any writer who wishes to write beautiful descriptive paragraphs and clever metaphors needs to have a large, nuanced vocabulary and the ability to visualise things very clearly. Yeah, just try to read that whole thing.
That style of writing is just that: Personally speaking, my eyes tend to skim long descriptive passages anyway.
Excessive description is just boring. Writing like you speak is the best way to avoid using unfamiliar words you may not fully understand, or making complex sentences with more clauses than you can handle. You might like to consider using a dictionary program with a thesaurus feature such as the excellent WordWeb or a physical dictionary and a thesaurus, if you like dead trees.
This will allow you to familiarise yourself with whatever words catch your fancy before using them. The best way to describe it is with examples.
She remembered doing the same with her previous students. Princess Celestia looked down at Twilight Sparkle, an age-worn face on a pillow. Her eyes were wet with tears. All old, all smiling… all with permanently closed eyelids.
Pinkie turned on her chainsaw and menacingly walked over to Rainbow Dash, preparing to cut her in half. Pinkie revved her chainsaw and skulked across the room. And finally, a few examples of when an author both shows and tells errors easily fixable with the backspace key: The squirrel twitched for the last time.
Fluttershy sniffled as she pulled a cloth over it, heartbroken by the passing of one of her animal friends. Rarity hummed a tune as she passed a long strip of red cloth through her sewing machine, revelling in the joy of creation. Now, showing is often a good deal harder than telling.
The enormous benefit to that extra thought is that is much, much more engaging for the reader. Imagine what Spike would do in that situation, and tell us that. Back to top Colours, styles, and fonts I love colours, and bold and italic text are both great ways to emphasise things.
Non-linked underlines, on the other hand, belong in the 20th century. As fun as these little flourishes are, fiction-writing has some specific conventions regarding which ones can be used, and what they should be used for.
Keep in mind that most people read fiction as a form of escapism, and that strangely-formatted text can be a real immersion-killer. In fiction, using italics for thoughts formatted in the same way as speech, but without the quotation marks: I really like her mane, thought Sweetie Belle and emphasised words is generally accepted, although some say that even this is bad practice.
Screw said tags and their complicated punctuation, amirite? My advice for using colours in narrative is this: For those who do, use non-saturated colours, and either make them as unobtrusive as possible, or go completely insane. Thank heaven for small mercies. Using different fonts in the same story for effect can work nicely when handled with care.
This sort of thing is optionally accompanied by a shift into center-align, something I personally like to use coupled with italics instead of a font change. I can give the same general advice for messing around with fonts and font sizes:A Long Way Gone Questions and Answers.
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